WWW: Good analysis of the music magazine adverts (although you don't point out why the Rap/RnB artists use products to sell their brand - which is very interesting). You've spent some time on your blogs, and have an entry for almost all of them. However most of them need some improvement.
EBI: You are still missing several blog entries including most importantly your audience research. This needs to include an analysis of the results of your questionnaire.
- The Saturdays are not a RnB or HipHop group. You should find another album cover to analyse.
- In your analysis of the videos try to be much more specific. Phrases like "Many shots in this video are closeups or mid-long shots" because there is very little meaning in this sentence. Focus rather on the specific shot and explain how it creates meaning (you do do this to an extent in your analysis). You also need to include ALL the micro elements - not just Mise-en-scene and Cinematography.
-Include visual material to illustrate your theories entries.
GRADE - PR
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