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- Good visual examples included for most of your posts. I do like the fact that you've made the effort to illustrate your brief entry with an inclusion of a Digipack.
- You've clearly tried to keep up to date with all your posts. Well done.
- Range of different music videos these are clearly well chosen and you've included youtube versions on each entry.
EBI
- Flip the image of the Tinie Tempah album back cover, it is upside down.
- Check your spelling, grammar and syntax.: e.g. this year's task not: this years task. Your concord is also inconsistant e.g. "Colours used in the video may representing the emotions". You can easily correct this by re-reading (outloud) the work you've written.
- Could you include visual material for the "Convention of a Music Video" Entry?
-Not much analysis of the music videos. You tend to be much too general. You need to focus on specific elements of the music video: i.e. Camera Work, Editing, Mise en scene and Sound. These then need to be supported by accurate and relevant examples. Please do this. These entries are too short.
- Avoid waffle! Phrases like "this video uses a lot of creativity" and "The creativity and effects in the video helps reduce viewer fatigue" do not actually add anything to the factual analysis and have now actually cost you marks.
Effort - IN
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