- The presentation of your work is excellent. I really like the captions under each image and the screen grabs used to accompany the music videos. This level of attention to detail in presentation will get you higher marks.
- You have reflected carefully on your role and you have shown that you have learned about the process of making a music video and how you can improve next time.
- You have acted on the feedback Mrs Jarrett gave you last time which is excellent.
EBI
- You should write what you have learned about Final cut and WWW/EBI of skills to go with the images of you using it. Also include some screengrabs and explain what you are doing.
- You should make a post discussing your development from year 12 into year 13 and make it visual.
Due Thursday 21/7
- You should embed the final edit of In the Sun
- You should write, record and embed a director's commentary analysing In the Sun.
Fantastic work here Dan, but still a couple of bits missing. Make sure you catch up and make the improvements straight away. This is a great start to A2, well done!
EFFORT VG (though still some IN)
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